In some parts of the world, it's becoming increasingly popular to try to find out the history of their own family. why do you think people do this? Do you think it's a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, it is popular trend to find history of particular family and it is very easy because of internet. It has some positive development such as to know about ancestors, our tradition and culture etc. besides that, some negative development such as waste of time and money, sometime is cause worse effect on our mind etc. I would like to give my opinion in conclusion.
On one hand, people are taking more interest on family history, some of them found on internet or some of them people heard from their grandparents. The reason is that, this history is the reference for future generation, how they were survived, thus parents should tell to children. Another reason is to get information about particular disease such as diabetes, thyroid, some form of cancer. If someone has any disease in past then, future generation can take some precaution on this. Furthermore, in India, the family history is important for marital purpose, we can say that is the tradition of India. However, history is important for next generation because they can understand about the culture, some tradition of family, living style, eating pattern. In addition, ancestors followed some rules, patterns because there is some scientific reason behind this.
On the other hand, some people think that it has negative effect. If someone wants to know about genes then, he or she has to spend high amount of money also all this kinds of report take long time. Thus, this is waste of time and money. Another reason is that, if we could focus on present then our future would be better. One more thing is that sometime history caused negative effect on attitude. For instance, if someone’s grandparents had good background or belonged to royal family then their grandchildren may take advantage of this. So these are negative effect.
To conclude that, to check our family background is good if we take it as positive way. Thus, I believe that it is positive development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, thus, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93920972644 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60111344451 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519756838906 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3323547269 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.25 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.45 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182859744566 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595742501301 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436776316154 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110544984304 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251652645231 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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