write about the following topic:
Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
write at least 250 words.
Environmental problems are indeed controversial topics in almost social media due to their significant influence. Although several people completely do have strong activities to ease environmental issues, the majority still consider these matters do not have any relevance to their responsibilities and they do not concern enough about them. In the following essay, both these ideas will be discussed.
There are a certain amount of people paying great attention to environmental matters. Concerning about environment means that doing more activities and campaigns contributing to save energy or recycle and reuse more. To make it clear, in recent decades, many countries adopted renewable and clean energy resources instead of using non-renewable resources, such as wind, solar and wave power. Moreover, there are more and more people trying to cut down the amount of consumption of plastic merchandise and energy every day.
Concerning about surrounding world also means that natural areas are recovering more rapidly. It is evident that many forests are expanding and a variety of endangered species are rescued from the verge of extinction. Not only governments and environmental organizations but also individuals together participated in tackling environmental issues.
Perhaps environmental matters would just be a tiny thing, however, if the major society changed the way in which they aware of their responsibilities. Honestly, people still cut down forests to make way for constructing more industrial zones or accomodating citizens. Besides, the existence of hazardous weather or climate also supported the view of people does not have enough care about environmental matters.
All things considered, although there are certain parts of people strongly caring about environmental issues, the majority still neglect themselves from joining hands to solve these matters. It would be better if the educational system is actually effective for all people to understand their responsibilities with the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 21, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, honestly, however, if, moreover, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75666666667 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17597054282 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3350412862 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.133333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202512852697 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641981521409 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520166733972 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11398127375 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464404668099 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.