What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice
Nowadays, everyone wants to become successful in their life. Technology has grown up very fatly. Everyone is using smartphones, computers, tablets for communication. But what if you do not know how to communicate by using those devices and how to use those. Suppose you are about to travel to another city then you should communicate in their languages. Personally, I believe that good communication is an important skill every person learns to be successful in the world today. I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
First of all, communication is important to know each other's personal view. To become successful, you should know how to communicate in a proper way. Nowadays, many people are using English as a language for communication. For example, In an I.T. industry to bring any new project from clients we need to communicate in their language. Companies need to convince them to bring any new project. This all processes are handled by the project manager. I believe that project managers have knowledge about technology as well and they should communicate in a proper way.
Secondly, to become successful in life we need to adopt other countries' cultures too. To understand a person's nature, you should communicate with them in their languages. For instance, In the USA we can adopt their work culture and for you need to communicate with them, understand their work time, work culture, what techniques they are using etc. All this we can adopt by communication. Communication brings people closer and by communicating with others it will also improve your knowledge, thing power.
Finally, Communication is a very important skill that everyone should learn. I would like to give one example of one of my friend’s parents who was travelling to the USA but as they don’t know the English language they were faced with a lot of issues as they were not able to communicate to other people. After that they decided to improve their communication skills by learning English language.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that everyone should learn English language and improve their communication skills to become successful in their lives because communication brings people closer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...countries cultures too. To understand a persons nature, you should communicate with the...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11716621253 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94870480225 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476839237057 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.468903362 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.652173913 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9565217391 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52173913043 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187598170194 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644154849845 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826866930671 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122065376162 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622589814835 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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