The charts above give information aboute the averaga monthly temperature also the average number of hours when sunshine per year in three different cities as London, New Year and Sydney.
The temperature in Sydney is sunny from the twenty fifth of January to March, then the number of sunny hours decreeses from March to middle July and from the fifteenth of July the number of sunny hours increases to last October and the November begin the number of sunny hours to last until December.Then the temperature in New York and London.
The New York begins sunny hours from fives January to middle of March and the number of sunny hours increased from tens of March to middle July then the sunny hours go down to last until December, just like in london.Then the Londons sunny hours begins from sevens of January to middle August and the middle of August the sunny hours decreased to December.
In conclusion, the Londons total annual hours sunshine is 1,180 hours and New Yorks sunshine hours is 2,535 and last cities is Sydney. Syndey sunshine hours is 2,473
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Then
...r of sunny hours to last until December.Then the temperature in New York and London....
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Suggestion: Then
...ast until December, just like in london.Then the Londons sunny hours begins from sev...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hours'' or 'hour's'?
Suggestion: hours'; hour's
...In conclusion, the Londons total annual hours sunshine is 1,180 hours and New Yorks s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81967213115 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28668774568 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.404371584699 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.919173869 43.030603864 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.4 112.824112599 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.6 22.9334400587 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240048634599 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185775185272 0.103423049105 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119460191413 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201324982916 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130920755551 0.0819641961636 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.2329268293 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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