Some people believe that everyone has right to university education. Therefore, government should make university education free for everyone, no matter what their financial background is. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
A group of people think that government should implement free tuition policy to pursue tertiary education, so that whole society would be profited if youth would be provided with the free education. I disagree with the norm. I firmly believe that student himself benefits from the studies. Therefore, the tuition fee should be borne by the student alone.
Proponents of free tertiary education cite a host of benefits. They say that if the education system were totally free, then the whole community would get advantages. This is why in the developing countries has strong effort to raise an educational level of society by putting as much money as possible into providing educational institutions. Developing countries cannot move ahead without enough educated professionals for instances doctors, scientists, accountant etc. Therefore, the government of such countries provide scholarship or free education to as much student as they can fund, because they have realize that whole societal foundation would be benefitted. Despite, in many developed countries also started offering free graduated education as there have been requirements of higher educated population.
On the other hand, there are many credible arguments against free higher education. Firstly, individual themselves gets benefitted from the tertiary education therefore students should themselves pay for it. Doctors, lawyers, scientists get some of the highest earning in most societies. It is justified that the government, therefore tax-payers should not pay for the students who later receives highest amount of money that anyone else. Moreover, most students belong to the middle class families hence; parents could pay for their fees. Secondly, it is well-known fact that if a people get something for free he doesn’t value it too much. Because of free education, the university classes would be full of non-sensible students; as a result they would spoil the decorum of the classes. Many students would not even complete the education and drop out mid-way. In such cases, government money would be wasted. As it is, government has a lot on its shoulders. Therefore, it would be wrong if we would put entire burden of higher education of government shoulders alone.
To conclude, it would not be wise if we put the cost of education on government and so the cost should probably be paid for by student themselves, or take some loans, which must be paid back later.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 572, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hip or free education to as much student as they can fund, because they have real...
^^
Line 2, column 610, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'realized'.
Suggestion: realized
...nt as they can fund, because they have realize that whole societal foundation would be...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'receives the highest'.
Suggestion: receives the highest
...ould not pay for the students who later receives highest amount of money that anyone else. Moreo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2062.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31443298969 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82318510018 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536082474227 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7197982437 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7272727273 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206216792742 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646787563027 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257559412694 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126035131262 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338119492611 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 572, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hip or free education to as much student as they can fund, because they have real...
^^
Line 2, column 610, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'realized'.
Suggestion: realized
...nt as they can fund, because they have realize that whole societal foundation would be...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'receives the highest'.
Suggestion: receives the highest
...ould not pay for the students who later receives highest amount of money that anyone else. Moreo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2062.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31443298969 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82318510018 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536082474227 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7197982437 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7272727273 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206216792742 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646787563027 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257559412694 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126035131262 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338119492611 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.