The pie charts displays the survey findings, regarding the reason why MBA graduates choose the degree they desire, and also the employer's sayings on why they recruit MBA graduates.
Overall, more than half of the MBA passouts have choosen their degree for increasing their job opportunities. Also, the employer's are mostly look for personality and background knowledge of the candidate inorder to hire them.
To start, 65% of students are looking to pursue MBA for increasing their job opportunities. 15% of them considered MBA so that they can do their job better. Just over 10% (12%) of the students have choosen MBA for enhancing their personal skills. Less than 10% of students who cleared MBA have chosen their degree inorder to help other people.
To continue, half of the job hiring mainly focused on personality and previous knowledge of the graduates. 20% of selection is based on previous connections of the MBA passouts. Furthermore, the qualification of the candidate is the least important criteria inorder to secure a job after completing MBA.
- Missions to explore space are hugely expensive and there are problems on Earth which demand attention The number of these missions needs to be reduced Do you agree or disagree 78
- The charts show information concerning speed camera use together with statistics on road accidents for the city of Melbourne 56
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 50
- The Internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication However its often controversial so many people think it needs to be controlled Others believe there should be no interference whatsoever Discuss both points of view 84
- The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'looked'.
Suggestion: looked
...unities. Also, the employers are mostly look for personality and background knowledg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19186046512 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83708420426 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552325581395 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.054951296 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26434322699 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105773991615 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520392029627 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167692768879 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529166594386 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.