Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Undoubtedly, our modern life is much more complicated than the past, and we are social creatures that need to communicate, interact, and make friends. While many people believe that the ability to stay friend with small number of people for ages are important for our happines, others agree with the obverse idea. Nevertheless, from my point of view, for being happy we should make a lot of new friends. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the ability to make many new friends can improve our self confidence. In fact, having small number of friends and interact with them is not an effective way to enhanc our confidence. People who are able to make plenty of new friends are more happy because they think other people can trust them, so this can make them happy. On the other hand, this can be more fun for us to have a lot of people around. For example, if you only have two friends and they are busy, you have to stay alone at home, but if you are able to make a friend in a second, you can go out for a coffe and find someone to spend time with. This is compeletly Obvious that both spending funny times with new friends and knowing people think I am a good person makes a person happy.
Furthermore, the ability to make many new friends, can help us to learn how to react with different people in the different situations. People have to learn how to communicate in the society, and getting experience during friendship with many people is very valuable characteristic of ability of making new friends. To cast light on it, I have been studying for three years at university, and I have a lot of friends because I like to speak with people about any topic such as weather, sport, student life, and job. Making new friends and disscuss with people about every thing help me to understand people's problems and difficulties. Consequently, some times I forgive a person because I think maybe he has some problems, and also I learn what is the best action in the specific situation. There is no doubt that with spending time only with two or three people, we cannot get crucial experiences of living. Thus, making many new friends will help us to improve our communication skills and the quality of life, which without any doubt led to happiness.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the ability to make new friends is a better way to be happy. This is because, it increase our self-confidence by knowing that we are valuble person for others. Also, it can help us to get critical experience about communication and interaction with people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, thus, while, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2142.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59656652361 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56485081921 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465665236052 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7815761979 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.1 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55 5.45110844103 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406106719216 0.236089414692 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136525598394 0.076458572812 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849417271245 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263401840346 0.150856017488 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750076592038 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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