Tidal power
The passage here states the importance of the tidal power. It describes how the tidal power helps in the generation of electricity.The lecture however points out the drawbacks of using the tidal power. It explains how it is more harmful to use the tidal power and undermines the advantages mentioned in the passage.
First, the lecture tells us that the tidal power only provides a fraction of our energy requirements, whereas the negetive effects of harnessing this energy are many. It is difficult to find the proper locations to coonstruct the dams in the first place and even if the proper place is found it only benefits the regional population which is very less.
Second, the lecture tells us that due to this tidal power the quality of water in the river is detoriates which in turn effects the wildlife in those area. This also leads to habitat destruction in many areas. Fishes which migrate between river and sea also gets affected as there ability to migrate gets hampered.
Lastly, the lecture also tells us how the economy of the place also gets affected due to these tidal plants. It provides example of fishing boats to illustrate the same. It tells us that the ability of fishing boats to navigate gets disturbed thus leading to loss of
incomes to the fishermen of those area.
Thus, the lecture clearly highlights the limitations of using the tidal energy which is suggested in the passage by showing us how it disrupts the wildlife as well as the human life of those areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... helps in the generation of electricity.The lecture however points out the drawback...
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'those areas'?
Suggestion: this area; those areas
...s which in turn effects the wildlife in those area. This also leads to habitat destruction...
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Line 8, column 29, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'those areas'?
Suggestion: this area; those areas
...to loss of incomes to the fishermen of those area. Thus, the lecture clearly highlight...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, second, so, thus, well, whereas, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 259.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81853281853 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49531395467 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467181467181 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 419.366225166 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0192041144 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06452816374 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364886105671 0.272083759551 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160938768918 0.0996497079465 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176386632889 0.0662205650399 266% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173796148842 0.162205337803 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.196458755104 0.0443174109184 443% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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