Young people spend their free time in shopping malls. This has negative effects on young people and society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Having a social life has been an important aspect of human life in which modern day shopping malls play a key role and influence them to gather under one roof. A group of people thinks that it negatively affects youngsters, to which I also agree. The main reason behind my opinion is that firstly, it makes them materialistic and secondly, they make unnecessary expenditures causing various other problems for them.
To begin with, young people spend time in malls and get tempted by all the brands that are extremely expensive for them. Still, they buy those products even when they are unable to financially. For this, they put pressure on their parents who are already struggling to manage their budget, or borrow money from their friends. If both the options are unavailable, they end up indulging in activities like stealing out of desperation. For example, in a survey conducted by Times of India in 2018, it was found that 78% of teenagers who belonged to middle-class families were unhappy with their status, led a life of dissatisfaction and suffered from inferiority complex. Therefore, it is one of the major reasons behind my opinion.
In addition to this, when people visit malls, they tend to spend 3 to 4 hours in the premises. This creates a need to spend money on food and beverages, which is exploited by the authorities. To exemplify, generally it is observed that a food product like sandwich is sold inside the mall at a price that is three-folds more than what a person might spend at an outlet. As youngsters do not normally understand the pain of earning money, they spend their money without second thoughts with the motive to create a good image among the peers. Thus, in this way, their expenditure goes out of control.
To conclude, I would say that undoubtedly malls have brought a level of comfort to people, but it can have an adverse impact of youngsters by making them more inclined towards material and encouraging them to spend money on products for superficial objectives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87209302326 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73341772724 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610465116279 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1973723141 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.733333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202540646891 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066208566079 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614673217451 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106008623641 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542628097327 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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