More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories. Some poeple think that photographs are not a reliable source of news while others consider photographs to be irrefutable.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Although a segment of society believes that photographs are unreliable, others think that pictures with articles present undeniable truth. Even though photographs are not reliable because they can be forged easily, I believe they are essential because images can be considered as truth most of the time and easy to convey lengthy messages.
On the one hand, pictures can be doctored easily. That is to say that with the rise in technology, there are myriad software programs to photoshop the photos, by which an image can be easily distorted and present as a fact. That is how many newspapers publish distorted information with their articles. For instance, a Jawahar Lal Nehru photo, in which he can be seen in an intimate condition with 2 women, was published in many renowned newspapers to take political gain in elections and after a long time, it was proofed as a falsified photo. However, I do not support this viewpoint because many governments start taking a toll on this problem and trying to solve this problem these days.
On the other hand, pictures make news lively. Nevertheless to mention that images generally catch the attention of the reader and tell the story of the article in one view, if they are not manipulated. One does not have to switch pages and read all the written bulky writing but just look at the photo and decide whether the story is worth reading or not. To illustrate, research conducted on 10 participants by Leonard Cooper, professor at Rice University, in which participators have to see the 10 photos without reading the written text around it, 10 out of 10 have guessed the correct story without reading the text. Therefore, I believe this viewpoint should be conceived because most of the pictures are authentic and help readers to understand the frame of the story in an article.
To conclude, though images are easily maligned with new technologies, however, I believe later viewpoint has more weightage because, a large number of published photographs is genuine, and they are helpful for reader and viewers to understand the writing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
... other hand, pictures make news lively. Nevertheless to mention that images generally catch ...
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...r viewpoint has more weightage because, a large number of published photographs is genuine, and t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, for instance, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99140401146 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71690659243 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558739255014 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.626249571 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152778436054 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564378457806 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463420303579 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908771137394 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424945728434 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.