Some people believe that what children watch on television influences their behaviour. Others say that amount of time spent watching television influences their behaviour.
Discuss both views and give own opinion.
Although one segment of society believes that behaviour of children gets impacted by the content, they watch on television, others think that it mainly because of the time they spent watching TV. Even though young ones become irritative if they spectate the TV for a long time, I believe behavioural changes mainly depend on the content that has been watched.
On the one hand, watching TV for a prolonged period of time can turn children into irritable personalities. That is to say that a TV screen emits blue rays and staring at it for a longer period can disturb the sleep cycles of kids. This results in sleep deprivation in children and further escalate into intolerant personalities. For instance, a research conducted by R. Hempbell, a professor in Perdue University, on 2000 children, states that children who watch more TV for 4 to 5 hours are more stressed in their daily lives. However, I do not support this viewpoint because, with new technologies, blue rays’ problems are decreasing, so does sleep deprivation.
On the other hand, content what the young generation watch on TV can turn them into offensive people. Nevertheless to mention that most of the content that was consumed by the children such as cartoons, movies, and videos often glorify criminal activities. Younger ones start imitating those questionable traits from the TV, thereby portrayed it in their normal lives and reinforce into their behaviors. To illustrate, a video captured by the police helicopters of a 16-year teenager rash driving the car. Basically, he was copying road rash from the movies. Therefore, this viewpoint should be conceived because children can learn harmful traits from violent movies and become harmful to society.
To conclude, due to long time staring the screen of TVs, children can become irritative and harm to themselves, however, I think watching inappropriate content not only make children violent but also could be a potential danger to society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, i think, such as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16510903427 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82085120173 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579439252336 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4104802198 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.533333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184583237223 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058802278711 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605418691557 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115175384457 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042916069783 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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