More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be created with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged.
To what extent do you agree
It is often believed that health issues that are caused by a sedentary lifestyle cannot be cured by modern medical science, hence, conventional medicines should be adopted. I completely agree with the statement because there are no side effects of traditional medicines and it can treat untreatable diseases.
Firstly, traditional medicines do not have other complications on the body. That is to say that medicine forms such as Ayurveda, acupuncture, and homeopathy are ways that based on natural herbs. Due to that, there are generally no or very few side-effects whereas allopathic medicines formulas are very complex in nature that is balancing one chemical in the body might disturb another process. To illustrate, green tea is a cure for any cold problems without any undesired results while any cold remedy in modern medicine makes sleepy. Therefore, adopting older forms of remedies should be encouraged.
Further, traditional medicines can treat incurable diseases. Nevertheless to mention that even though there is so much advancement is achieved in the last century, in the field of medicine, there are many diseases, cancer, diabetes and stress, and so on, which are still incurable. However, the traditional medical system has proven remedies which are very effective in an unimaginable way. For instance, there is no treatment of cancer in the medical system so far, but the combination of Ayurveda and yoga together can remedify the untreatable disease as claimed by Patanjali Yogpeeth. Thus, traditional medicines are better than modern medicines.
To conclude, I still agree with the scenario because the herbal way of treatment is generally free from any undesired result and it is able to heal immedicable diseases as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37818181818 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91238449918 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7335666078 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.769230769 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249727894848 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919251362404 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746153413541 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153215582806 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940246532944 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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