The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first pie chart illustrates the proportion of energy use whilst the second pie chart demonstrates the proportion of the greenhouse gas emissions by the respective activities in an average Australia household.
Overall, while the energy is mainly spent on heating, the activity contributes the largest proportion of greenhouse gas emissions is, in fact, water heating. That is, if an activity consumes much energy, it is not necessarily that activity also emits a large amount of greenhouse gas.
Despite the fact that nearly a half of the total energy (around 42%) is spent on heating, only 15% of total greenhouse gas emissions are constituted by this activity. On the other hand, the proportions of the energy use and greenhouse gas emissions are approximately the same for the water heating activity (30% and 32%, respectively) and the cooling activity (2% and 3%, respectively).
However, in other activities, the proportions of the total greenhouse gas they emit are twice as large as the proportion of the total energy spent on them, such as: refrigeration (14% and 7%, respectively), lighting (8% and 4%, respectively) and other appliances (28% and 15%, respectively).
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, while, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28191489362 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11629048873 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521276595745 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5345083954 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.5 112.824112599 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1666666667 5.23603664747 271% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244250108519 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13884888829 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089408173272 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17114614271 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099280452804 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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