Some people believe that teaching music in schools is a vital part of growing up and the human experience, whilst others believe that teaching music in school is a waste of time and resources.
Discuss both the views and give opinion.
In recent years curriculum has changed a lot with an addition of an extra activities like sports, music, outings and many more. Few people think that teaching music in school is good idea and play an important role to children’s life, while other people contradict the same belief. Be that as it may, In my opinion it is a really good idea to teach such form of art at schools.
On the one hand, which I favor, education is not the only thing that ought to be taught and not all the students are good at that. In addition to this, different child have different abilities and teaching music can help them to explore and interest in this field. Likewise some may be good at sports too. Another reason to support this argument is, nowadays, every field has opportunity to grow if someone has talent in that, and, many of the students can find interest in music and can carry on further as their profession. Many of the music artists nowadays have started carrier from young age and even music schools are available in order to rise them further.
On the other hand, many people see this as a time spoiling activity. Firstly, adding music to student’s curriculum may lead them to some burden and less concentration to regular subjects. Not only students learn basic subjects like math, science and many others, but also music, art, sports. These things cover most of the time of their day and can lead them to less productive to other subjects. Secondly, music can be seen as an extracurricular activity rather than just a subject to pass. It is not a subject to increase someone’s result to compete with others. Thus it can be seen as waste of time.
In recapitulation, despite people varying with their opinion, if we widen the horizon and see the positive outcomes it has better results. I am totally supporting an argument to add music in regular curriculum.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
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Suggestion: Likewise,
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent to add music in regular curriculum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, likewise, may, really, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68693009119 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54058255769 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559270516717 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4769158811 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7058823529 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208547230199 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667091562137 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470223722811 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12623490636 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036447375733 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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