Some people believe that teaching music in school is a vital part of growing up and the human experience, whilst others believe that teaching music in schools is waste of time and resource. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Globally, music can make lot of change in human being life, people are very attach with music from ages , good musician can make individual entertainment as well as stress free in busy life, I feel that it is always good to teach musical class to children with their other school study, it will help overdevelopment of child and feel them great experience of music while learning, on the other hand some people think that teaching music in school just waste of time as well as losing resource. The following paragraphs will illustrate both view
As matter of fact, teaching musical lesson to pupil with their primary study will help them to learn about music and musical instrument, learning music at young age will help them great experience of life and will help overdevelopment of child, and also make them their career in music industry in future, statistical survey of Ontario school of music states that 30% increase in overall development of child by learning music at school time.
However , on the other hand some people believe that teaching (introducing) musical lecture in school level education it is just wasting of time and resource firstly children will lose their actual subject study time and lost their concentrate on require subject secondly school have to invest in lots of musical instrument will be waste of money, CEO of Zoom TV Dr Gupta found in his research that teaching children music in their early education will lead to lost their focus on their actual study.
Considering the above discussion, it can be concluded that teaching musical lesion to children in very beginning stage with their primary education will help their overall development as well as learn how music change life of human being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9724137931 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49086339456 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486206896552 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.2975951904 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.763857242 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 360.5 106.682146367 338% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.5 20.7667163134 349% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.75 7.06120827912 351% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332900259511 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.219384181658 0.084324248473 260% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662858853899 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220348346297 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712785988154 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.2 13.0946893788 292% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.86 50.2224549098 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 11.3001002004 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.73 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.1190380762 304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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