In this day and age, language educating has drawn a lot of attention from the public. It is said that some experts claim that children should be taught a foreign language at primary school instead of at secondary school. While I accept that this trend may have some drawbacks, I strongly believe that its benefits are outweighed.
On one hand, teaching children a foreign language can do harm to them in some ways. First, at the age of a primary student, children should not be taught things that require their hardworking. To be more specific, children in this age should be taught detrimental skills such as mother language, compulsory subjects or even how to play sports. Hence, their physical and mental health will be increase gradually, this will ensure for the full development of children in the future. Second, children can be expose with some other foreign languages in many ways such as watching TV, listening to the radio and so forth. For instance, there are many TV channels using foreign languages with subscription such as: Fox Sports, Star Movies, HBO and therefore children can learn these languages in their own way.
On the other hand, teaching a foreign language for a children at primary school could have some advantages as well. First, learning a foreign language early can make sure that children will not be left behind, due to the rapid development of our world. In other words, the sooner children learn foreign language, the more chances they can get in the future, as headhunters will prefer interviewers who can master more than only one language. Moreover, learning a foreign language early can develop children's linguistic thinking. For example, if children are exposed with foreign languages soon, they will not be scare to talk with foreigners or to use these languages in daily activities, this helps them to become global citizens in near future.
All in all, I would argue that the benefits of teaching children a foreign language at primary school outweight its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99702380952 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58363333512 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520833333333 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2491248992 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.933333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382589237081 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151963902733 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104006017613 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2654650646 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064696542938 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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