In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight.
How far do you agree with either of these views?
In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. In some countries have children begin school old year but I am don’t the agree.
My opinion the education for children it is very important.But some countries do not think that. Usually have old years children begin the school at the Asian countries, the reasons are based on history. The Europe countries pay attention the children's education. Some countries do not have education and old peoples illiterate. This situation tbe big problem at the countries, becouse at countries not rise. When the leaving the countries illiterate peoples that countries not rise. If the education is higher in the states, there is an increase. More people come to European countries for education, because there is higher education.
Education begins for children aged 3-4 years in European countries. The education system is very important and needed by every country. I agree the education begin the young age children. I think people care about education. Last years education is very rising every countries, and this leads to the proliferation of new discoveries and to the application of many things to the right order and to the enactment of new laws. The new generation of children will also be very educated.
I think young children will be better off if they start education early, so I think it would be appropriate for each country to review their education systems to start at an earlier age for children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01509433962 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68723231507 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48679245283 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8863522113 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1764705882 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5882352941 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94117647059 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426534035295 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150390013548 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179460194023 0.0667982634062 269% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305156834552 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.229498722454 0.056905535591 403% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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