Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The following appeared in a memorandum from administrative head of the international students’ activities at Rydell College
“To better attend to the needs of the international students being admitted to Rydell College, we should build a new dining hall that serves food to students at subsidized rates. The current dining hall is very old and serves only expensive items and dishes, something that will certainly prevent future international students from applying to Rydell College. Building a new dining hall will avert this possibility and will definitely lead to a dramatic increase in a popularity of Rydell College. Moreover, a new dining hall will help Rydell College to justify an increased budget for educational improvement this year. Building a new dining hall will therefore be a great step towards enhancing the ranking of Rydell College.”
So given argument is based on regarding the International student in the Darrington College. Given argument said that, the international students is primary depend on the college cafeteria.I am strongly disagree with given argument, but If i get apporopiate response on my following three question then maybe the given statement is maybe stated the right information.
Firstly, the statement said that, the international student is unhappy with the college cafeteria. But my question is that , how many student are unhappy with the college cafeteria? There is no evidence regarding the how many percentage is unhappy with cafeteria.
Secondly, If we considered that, student is unhappy with the cafeteria. but where is state that, student is unhappy bacause of old cafeteria building or serve only expensive dishes in cafeteria? There is other reason maybe to dislike the cafeteria serving time or no space available in the cafeteria.
Thirdly,the statement state that, if we build the new building of cafeteria, international student attaract towards the Darrington college and ranking of college may be improved.But If we look carefully in the argument statement there is no evidence regrding the international student choice college on the basis of quality of cafeteria and building of cafeteria, additionally, there is no proof that, international student is morely dependend on the college cafeteria.
If I get the evidence and appropriate answer on the above three question, i will be agree with the argument statement stated by Director of Darrington College.
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Comments
e-rater score report
No. of Words: 246 350
Minimum 250 words wanted
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 246 350
No. of Characters: 1292 1500
No. of Different Words: 104 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.96 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.252 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.928 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 102 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.499 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.889 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.501 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.805 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.299 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...primary depend on the college cafeteria.I am strongly disagree with given argumen...
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Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
... on the college cafeteria.I am strongly disagree with given argument, but If i get appor...
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Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ly disagree with given argument, but If i get apporopiate response on my followin...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... maybe stated the right information. Firstly, the statement said that, the in...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...llege cafeteria. But my question is that , how many student are unhappy with the c...
^^
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'many students'.
Suggestion: many students
...afeteria. But my question is that , how many student are unhappy with the college cafeteria?...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
...feteria? There is no evidence regarding the how many percentage is unhappy with cafeter...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun percentage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many percentages'.
Suggestion: many percentages
... There is no evidence regarding the how many percentage is unhappy with cafeteria. Second...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ercentage is unhappy with cafeteria. Secondly, If we considered that, student...
^^^
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... student is unhappy with the cafeteria. but where is state that, student is unhappy...
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...no space available in the cafeteria. Thirdly,the statement state that, if we ...
^^^
Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...vailable in the cafeteria. Thirdly,the statement state that, if we build the n...
^^^^
Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
... and ranking of college may be improved.But If we look carefully in the argument st...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... dependend on the college cafeteria. If I get the evidence and appropriate an...
^^^^
Line 9, column 79, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ate answer on the above three question, i will be agree with the argument stateme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.9520958084 15% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 28.8173652695 56% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 55.5748502994 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 2260.96107784 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 243.0 441.139720559 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49382716049 5.12650576532 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.56307096286 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07477306054 2.78398813304 110% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 204.123752495 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43621399177 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 705.55239521 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59920159681 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 118.928592021 57.8364921388 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.5 119.503703932 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 23.324526521 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 5.70786347227 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.20758483034 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105423970236 0.218282227539 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550564080483 0.0743258471296 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449647302912 0.0701772020484 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740744150841 0.128457276422 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432445295881 0.0628817314937 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.3799401198 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 48.3550499002 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.197005988 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.5979740519 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 98.500998004 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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