In this day and age, despite the fact that agriculture is advanced, many inhabitants are facing starvation. It is said that many people all over the world are still hungry. There are a host of reasons behind this penomenon, and several solutions should be adopted to address this problem tackled in particular ways.
On one hand, as governments are pouring money into facilities which make agriculture products become better, this makes the average price of food increase and therefore many people having low salary can not afford buying food. To be more specific, there are many high quality food such as rice, sugar and so forth being sold in supermarkets with higher prices than they were before. Moreover, in order to make more profit, some food sellers do not mind raising the price of their products without enhance the quality of them. Hence, there is a rapid increase of money spent on money. Consequently, more and more people must cut down on their eating potions to be able to pay for many things else such as: electricity, water, fuels and many others daily activities.
I strongly believe that there are still some solve this problem. First, governments are responsible to make sure that their citizens' thirst and hunger are not worth-worrying as these are two basic demand of people, only after having a balance diet can people work hard to contribute to the society. For instance, governments should check the products' quality and prices harshly in order to make sure that the prices are not blown up nonsensely. Last but not least, each individuals should be wise choosing the suitable food products. A good food product must be both affordable in price and safe in using, we can find them from legit brands such as Vissan, AFC, KKK and so forth.
All in all, this trend can be ascribed to two aforementioned factors, and it can be dealt with by a joint endavor of both governments and individuals.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
...the world are still hungry. There are a host of reasons behind this penomenon, and s...
^^^^
Line 2, column 215, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to buy'.
Suggestion: to buy
...people having low salary can not afford buying food. To be more specific, there are ma...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for instance, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84756097561 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54977224257 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4438480834 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235059331462 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889035427586 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687042385138 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167218248745 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735267830978 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
...the world are still hungry. There are a host of reasons behind this penomenon, and s...
^^^^
Line 2, column 215, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to buy'.
Suggestion: to buy
...people having low salary can not afford buying food. To be more specific, there are ma...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for instance, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84756097561 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54977224257 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4438480834 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235059331462 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889035427586 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687042385138 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167218248745 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735267830978 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.