Many people think that experience a child had before starting school have the greatest influence on him while others claim that what a what he experiences as a teenager is more influential. I myself agree with both views and the essay below will explain further.
To commerce with, there are several reasons why experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future. Firstly, scientists have proven that some bad memories affected badly on a child's physical and mental strengh. To take an example. if a person fell out of a bicycle when he was young, they would be worried and reluctant to sit on a bicycle again. Secondly, some children had their own choice of what they would do in the future before going to school as in these days, there are many inspiring TV channels and careers guidance activities, which is useful and necessary for children.
On the other hand, many decisions about future are made when we are teenagers. Only when we have grown enough can we have clearer thoughts about the future so that we can choose the right path. In addtion, to adapt with unexpected changes in lives, teenagers tend to do something different from what they thought to do. For instance, if a family faced serious problem, teenagers living in that family would be supposed to take care of the whole family. Hence, they must do everything to keep their family stable.
All in all, every single experience is worth considering to be important. I concur with supporting both aforementioned opinions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86206896552 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56355340319 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2770669804 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6428571429 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28010739914 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825541838065 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101867746173 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166876122176 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104138839651 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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