The number of old people is increasing in many countries. Some people think this cause problems whilst other people think that old people have an important role to play
how far do you agree or disagree?
The rocketing advancement in medical science enables people to live longer that is the reason why the population of senior citizens are increasing in fewer countries. Some individuals are of the perspective that this might create trouble for society, others think that they are important as they have a crucial role to play. I agree with the latter view as having older people in our society has more benefit. However, it has also drawbacks too.
To commence with, the older people in the family is like the backbone of our body. In other words, they have a responsibility to shape society by using their experience of life. They can be a guide to the society in any situation moreover they can support the family by being the guide of the family. For instance, the family with a senior member inside, are less likely to get collapse in financial crises, according to the Times of India survey.
Moreover, in most of the houses, the responsibility of upbringing the children is upon the old people of families. They can teach their grandchildren effectively by giving them good values a well as the way by which they can live without having a trouble because elderly people have more experience of life. Also, a survey conducted among people of megacities indicates that children who grown up with their grandparents are less likely to get addicted to cigarettes and alcohol.
However, there are some issues involved with an increment of older people in society. The one common reason is that the majority of old people are non-working. This means they do not contribute to economies and even the government has to pay them back for expenses of their life. For example, Australia pays the total of 30% of its resources to the elderly people. So it can be stated that the increment in the number of elderly people may harm the economies.
In recapitulation, despite the adverse effect of having elderly people on economies, I strongly believe that senior citizens have a more crucial role to shape society as well as up bringing their grandchildren effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90598290598 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73218630517 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498575498575 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5505922521 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.294117647 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285612061368 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950449089751 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677226097616 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167200840021 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725210294488 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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