Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary era, it is a debatable question that whether it is must or not to be herbivorous for individuals as to adopt balanced diet there is no requirement to have flesh as a staple. According to my perception, it would be beneficial for entire eco-logical system, if every mortal adopt vegetarianism. Therefore, behind my opinion, there are various reasons which I will disclose in forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, it has been noticed that the population of abundant birds and animals is on the risk of diminishment, because meat-eaters tend to end up their lives solely for the sake of their own taste. Due to this, a great number of creatures are not available in modern era to see. This can be illustrated via a research conducted recently which revealed that gone are the days, when people used to spend their time to feed birds and animals just for to relax themselves. That said, in modern era, it seems difficult to seek for natural creatures. Therefore, it might be crucial for people to have a meat-less meat, that could assist humans to protect our desperating atmosphere.
In addition to that, substitutes such as protein and vitamins can also be found in dairy products namely milk, butter and so forth. Since above mentioned alternatives are considered the source of nutritious diet. Owing to it, it may be sillyness if a human-being still rely on non-vegetarian diet despite being aware from various fruitful results of meat free meal. As a consequence, when mortals may become aware of prior discussion, consumption of meat could be feasible to deficit for the mankind.
To conclude, being addicted to non-vegetarian meal is accounted worse thing due to the predicament of demolishing of birds and animals as well as benefits of other options including vegetarian food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ducts namely milk, butter and so forth. Since above mentioned alternatives are consid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, as to, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0365448505 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99999816043 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621262458472 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.169503248 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.615384615 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0926567053467 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321721093452 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315752253254 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549432982822 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164930132165 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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