The charts below shows the percentage of industry sectors contribution to the economy of India and turkey in 2000

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The charts below shows the percentage of industry sectors contribution to the economy of India and turkey in 2000.

Submitted by komal7698 on Thu, 02/18/2021 - 04:22

The two pie charts illustrates how 8 industry sectors contributed to the economy of India and turkey in 2000.
Overall, qt the beginning of the India, contractions contributed to the least to the agriculture was the highest of economy services. In compared at the end of period,health care and education became the largest contributed and lowest are finance,business and other services.
Firstly, construction had the lowest share to economy accounted a near 3% in india.In experiment a more than rised to agriculture.there was the health care and education and leisure and hospitality are the same percentage of industry sectors. At the beginning of the period,manufacturing and finance business and other services made up 8% and 5% respectively. There was a slightly increased government than the trade and transportation.
Secondly, finance business and education was half as trade,utilities and transportation.leisure and hospitality and agriculture are the same period of economy. Health care and education are more increased for economy in turkeys.The beginning of period, construction, manufacturing and government made up 10%,12% and 9% respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'highest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: highest
...to the least to the agriculture was the most highest of economy services. In compared at the...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , health
...rvices. In compared at the end of period,health care and education became the largest c...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 251, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , business
...rgest contributed and lowest are finance,business and other services. Firstly, construc...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...to economy accounted a near 3% in india.In experiment a more than rised to agricul...
^^
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , manufacturing
... sectors. At the beginning of the period,manufacturing and finance business and other services...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 59, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , utilities
...business and education was half as trade,utilities and transportation.leisure and hospital...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 229, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...e more increased for economy in turkeys.The beginning of period, construction, manu...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70689655172 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.8865577257 2.65546596893 146% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4904224007 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.125 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226211294534 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112184293531 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170029610232 0.0843802449381 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196065518055 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.200378353716 0.0819641961636 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 61.2550243902 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 11.4140731707 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'highest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: highest
...to the least to the agriculture was the most highest of economy services. In compared at the...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , health
...rvices. In compared at the end of period,health care and education became the largest c...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 251, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , business
...rgest contributed and lowest are finance,business and other services. Firstly, construc...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...to economy accounted a near 3% in india.In experiment a more than rised to agricul...
^^
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , manufacturing
... sectors. At the beginning of the period,manufacturing and finance business and other services...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 59, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , utilities
...business and education was half as trade,utilities and transportation.leisure and hospital...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 229, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...e more increased for economy in turkeys.The beginning of period, construction, manu...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70689655172 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.8865577257 2.65546596893 146% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4904224007 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.125 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226211294534 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112184293531 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170029610232 0.0843802449381 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196065518055 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.200378353716 0.0819641961636 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 61.2550243902 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 11.4140731707 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.