Nowadays, public are intending to buy a house instead of paying for the home.In my opinion, this condition has negative impact. However, the reasons about my thought are given below.
Firstly, buying a house rather than renting can create homeless for the people who doesn't have so much wealth to afford a house for their own.For instance, In Bangladesh many person are living under poverty, they can't afford to rent a house for their shelter.So how can they will be capable to buy a houshold that the thing should be taken account.It will be the worst thing for the individuals to live.
Secondly, the person who has built a building to give rent as his business interest, he will be doomed.The owners of a real estate company will have no more interest to continue their business.It will create a great havoc for the real estate business all over the world. Recently, we can see that in America most of the businessmen who have enlisted with top richest public, most of them have housing business.They will face serious fall down.
Finally, a great problem will appear for the foreigners specially travellers because when owning home system will be lasting then there will be no more renting system.The travellers will not get the chance to stay in places where they will go.It will create a devastating loss in world's business.
In conclusion, the hiring system of house should not be reduced.This change will bring forth huge effect upon world's economical system as well as refugee's with no home at all to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87692307692 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49240265726 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580769230769 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.13011814 49.4020404114 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.142857143 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.1428571429 20.7667163134 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.4285714286 7.06120827912 247% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13170980724 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603543590901 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532615808692 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769308082102 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433180560118 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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