Health is wealth and no one can deny this fact and there is no shortcut to a healthy life other than exercise or physical work and balanced diet. Exercise is even more important nowadays due to increase in stress and workload that the working population have to face every day. This essay will highlight the reasons why the people with job are not able to exercise enough and will also suggest some solutions to this issue.
The obvious reason for not being able to exercise is the time constraint, people with jobs have a busy schedule and it’s very difficult to take out time for any sort of workout while at work. In their free time as well people love to spend time with family and the aspect of exercise is ignored. Another reason is the lack of intent to exercise that could be due to the lifestyle we have these days.
There can be several small solutions to this major problem, such as rather than driving to workplace we can walk or ride a bike once or twice in a week. Instead of using the elevators, take stairs which can be a very good workout. Even at work try not to sit at the desk for too long, whenever time permits have a walk around in the open area. Regular stretching exercise at the desk can be helpful for back and shoulder pain. If the work life balance is maintained for every employee it’s even possible to have a daily routine of jogging or some work out even in the free time.
In conclusion there is no better way to get rid of health problems compared to exercise. A daily routine of exercising and smartly managing time between work and physical fitness can result in a much healthier and stress free life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as rather 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...s to this major problem, such as rather than driving to workplace we can walk or rid...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44884488449 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2273829346 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528052805281 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7236953397 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.692307692 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39873225281 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133919310248 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440316389035 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243691553471 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022767173251 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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