governments should spen money on railways rather than roads
In the era of mordernization , the variety of vehicle are established which commonly used in railways and roads. Some people consider that authority should invest budget for railways rather than roads.Im my perspective , i tend to advocate the given statement.
In the last century , with the appearance of railways industry, human being society has some tremendous innovation in various aspect namely as transport method. In many the train become an indispensable transportation known as an astouding efficient work.Anually,,train can able to carry millions of people to working palce, school , hospital , ...With a resonable budget, people have serviced by a train to any distance in a quick and safe way. Having revealed the array of benefits to human, train are expected to replace individual vehicle (car, motorbike,...) which ommit the significant amount of carbon dioxide.At the present ,perhap this replacement is a effective resolution to the vitally environment pollution.In economy aspect, with the array of consumer anually, investing for railways industry can be an rational stragtegy for overwhelming nation financial.
In other evidence, the vehicle in the future are projected to minimize the size which can resolve traffic jam .Hence, spending budget for expanding roads is absolutely redundant.However, authority still have to use money for road facility such as tree, sidewalk,.. which develop urban lanscape .
In conclusion, with the abundant of railways industry , invested more budget to railways rather than roads is an rational operation for the development of country .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, still, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64853556485 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21490631482 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644351464435 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.2766151456 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.0 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5555555556 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182194046525 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764552782023 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869395030069 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141237803241 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862134996238 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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