Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
history is an important subject which taught us many things.In fact, it is important for every students to have some knowledge about past.Some people might not like the idea that university student should have a course of history because the students already have so many subjects to study.How ever, I think otherwise.I feel this way because from history subject we learned from past.More over, improvistion in previous knowlegde create something new and useful.
To begin with, the subject will provide knowledge of the past. Histor y is very important for any civilizations in order to develop themselves. If, people do not learn from their past they will make the same mistake in future and they will never flourish.For example, student in the business class should have knowledge about the market in past. How the previous market crash like dot com crash and stock market crash in past. These information will be beneficial for business so, they when they set up a business they will know what possibilites results in a downfall of market.Therefore, I believe that learning history course should be mandatory one time by all university students.
Another reason is, it help to invent new things.Previously made machines, engines and other technologies were the bases in development of new technology. Therefore if a person have knowledge about the history of such inventions they can further improvise them and made it better. For instance, when first computer was invented it was so big and occupied a space of a room. It was not popular at that time. How ever computer is now popular. This would have happened because people read the history about computer and improvise its built, added new features and made its access for people. If, the people have no information about the history of computers we were never be able to use such a wonderful technology. As a result, it is very advantageous to take history course in the university.
In conclusion, I personally believe that it is very important that university students should be required to take history as a mandatory course. This is because, it will prevent from the same incidents in future. In addition, the knowledge of history used to create something new.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for example, i feel, i think, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 211.0 407.700716846 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21800947867 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89619608333 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620853080569 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.911093058 48.9658058833 267% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.285714286 100.406767564 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1428571429 20.6045352989 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 5.45110844103 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127952837031 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494377846924 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443518291809 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732290319289 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367509934123 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 11.7677419355 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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