You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
• say where you think you left the papers explain why they are so important
• tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam
I am your “Marmara” hotel’s custumer. I am opologise writing for letter. I am recently attended a meeting at your hotel.
When I returned home, I found my had left some important papers at the hotel, becous I am writing the letter for the hotel maneger.
I am living your hotel at the 05-07.02.2021 year two days. I am living at 505 number of the room. On the time I was maked the meeting. After meeting I was to leave the hotel. On the time I found my had left some important papers at the hotel. Please task the hotel staff to look my room for find my important papers. I remember the papers under the my bed, please looking there. That papers gor me very inportant the paper is my company. I will go to my company in England tomorrow, becouse need the today.
When you find my papers please call me.
My mobile number is 07958483983. One more time I opologise for evrything. Thank you.
Sincerely Ahmet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir or Madam I am your “Marma...
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Dear Sir or Madam I am your “Marmara” hotel’s custumer...
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Dear Sir or Madam I am your “Marmara” hotel’s custumer. I am opo...
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... Madam I am your “Marmara” hotel’s custumer. I am opologise writing for le...
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...er. I am opologise writing for letter. I am recently attended a meeting at your ...
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...I am recently attended a meeting at your hotel. When I returned home, I found m...
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...ng the letter for the hotel maneger. I am living your hotel at the 05-07.02....
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...etter for the hotel maneger. I am living your hotel at the 05-07.02.2021 y...
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...07.02.2021 year two days. I am living at 505 number of the room. On the time I w...
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... days. I am living at 505 number of the room. On the time I was maked the meeti...
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...f the room. On the time I was maked the meeting. After meeting I was to leave th...
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.... On the time I was maked the meeting. After meeting I was to leave the hotel. On th...
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...tel. Please task the hotel staff to look my room for find my important papers. I...
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...he hotel staff to look my room for find my important papers. I remember the pape...
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...ant papers. I remember the papers under the my bed, please looking there. That papers ...
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...rtant the paper is my company. I will go to my company in England tomorrow, beco...
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... is my company. I will go to my company in England tomorrow, becouse need the to...
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...d tomorrow, becouse need the today. When you find my papers please call me. My...
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... opologise for evrything. Thank you. Sincerely Ahmet
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...ything. Thank you. Sincerely Ahmet
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47398843931 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50685851291 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543352601156 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3799985024 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 48.375 76.5299724578 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.8125 16.8248392259 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9375 4.34317383033 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 2.54639175258 785% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375051505049 0.216113520407 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120280358971 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124696083341 0.0603063233224 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228345564322 0.12726935374 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926354987949 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.46 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.