You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might buy it from you write a letter to your friend. Explain
Why are you selling
Describe the television
Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.
Dear Rosy,
Hii! Hope you are doing well. You will be more than happy to know that I got posted at my dream location that is Chennai and I have to shift and report there before the end of the coming week. I will be getting a fully furnished apartment over there, due to which a major concern of mine is the newly purchased LED which I bought a few months ago.
I vividly remember that you were looking for the same model LED when you saw mine at a house-warming party last month. I must say that this LED has ample features. Its ultra-slim look gives it an elegant appearance and anti-glare glass screen makes prolonged watching more comfortable. As promised by the company, the HD picture quality of this model is the best, at present. Also, it can be attached to Wi-Fi/Ethernet and the world on the internet will available on the screen. Moreover, Samsung brand electronics come with 3 years warranty and this product is still in warranty.
If you want to give a look at it before making any decision, so you can visit my place at the weekend anytime. We will have fun and you will get the chance to inspect the TV before purchasing it.
Yours truly,
Pallavi.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-02-25 | Palki Sharma | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ne at a house-warming party last month. I must say that this LED has ample featur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45794392523 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47020855387 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663551401869 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3145118438 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169931482424 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627191141184 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629581546095 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105462837569 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346403844794 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.