A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
Dear John,
I hope you are doing well.
I am writing this letter to gather some information regarding some special things before visting your country.
As you know, I am coming to your hometown next week,So I want to accomany some gifts for your family because I will meet them for the first time and I want to greet them with special gift. Though,I am really confused about the perfect one , but I explored few of them at the gift shops, however, not able to choose it. Please recommend me some items that your family like ,sothat i can make aperfect choice.
Besides this, I never visited your country before, furthermore,it will be new experience for me and also I am not familiar with the weather , please let me know about the weather, so I can pack my suitcase with appropriate clothes.
Moreover, I am vegetarian and have some dietry restrictions and have allergy to some food products . Also, please let me know about the food you eat , so that I can tell you about my food preferences.
I am waiting for your response.
Best regards,
Nancy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...mend me some items that your family like ,sothat i can make aperfect choice. Besi...
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...sides this, I never visited your country before, furthermore,it will be new expe...
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...ting for your response. Best regards, Nancy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67379679144 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49759622383 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614973262032 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7784446345 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 4.34317383033 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247861605326 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956207860268 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558052789891 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134469668361 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388189984809 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.