today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as sahara desert or the antartic. what are the benefits and disadvantages for touristic who visit places?
Nowadays, tourism has become a very important source of money for countries which have extreme weather conditions, such as desert and tundra environments. There are people that enjoy this kind of conditions and they are very open to pay whatever the cost is. Thus, the importance of discussing positive and negative impacts by doing this type of truism.
Firstly, it has been shown that places with extreme weather are now safe for people visiting them. This is a result where local governments have invested a huge amount of money to bring people in safe conditions. Therefore, this has been impacting positively the economy for those countries and little by little more travel agencies offer good plans at very low cost.
However, there are negative impacts as well. Many people consider that those habitats have changed their natural environment badly and some environmental activists believe that all damage generated by tourism would not be recovered and in the near future those places will be very difficult to access or visit.
In summary, local governments should revisit their strategy to protect deserts and cold places by implementing policies that protect those natural environments and allowing people to visit them in order to generate jobs and other income to local people and return some money to their governments. This has been implemented in other countries and they have contained natural disasters and give people the countries to grow based on new jobs and plenty of other opportunities to generate income. In conclusion I agree that those places need to be accessible for anyone that is afforded to pay for it and follow related policies to visit them .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, in summary, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15328467153 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61375889041 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56204379562 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.3781392502 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.363636364 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158344359285 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599626369627 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532230219748 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952456355627 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269608455895 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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