At the end of a hard working day, finding a way to unwind and relay has become a necessity to many people. Whether listening to music or working out or watching movies. What really matters is to have a little time just for yourselves. Particularly watching movies, seems to be the most usual path people follow when it comes to spending their leisure time. This essay will examine the reasons behind this trend and try to find out why dedicating some hours of the day to this activity can also have a beneficial impact on our life.
Thanks to fast Internet connection and the wide spread of computers, the way the public enjoys movies has radically changed in the last years. These days virtually everyone can watch a movie on the Internet, in most cases even for free. Movies are not only a way to escape from reality, they help also people to cultivate dreams,become better,get inspired. Movies draw upon real life mirroring action,love,death,passions,desires. Movies stir people feelings,sometimes they hurt, sometimes they let watchers reflect on their actual behavior. Considering therefore watching movies a waste of time is basically a long shot.
Especially for those who are learning a new language or have planned to visit a foreign country,watching a movie can shed a light on an unknown culture. Being in contact with the language as it is actually spoken, will also help students to improve their listening and speaking abilities. Additionally,the viewer will also get in touch with the new mentality more closely and effectively than reading a book,for example. Images have a powerful effect on the mind and usually strike the imagination more intensively than words would do.
In conclusion. I firmly believe that watching movies not only is a perfect way to escape reality and relax,but it is also a formidable weapon to learn a language or have a glimpse on the rest of the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, really, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97805642633 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26848173441 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608150470219 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6450709476 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231230142861 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648311131538 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486560858869 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121759839506 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558993217625 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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