Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can the government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
The modern society is generating an increasing amount of waste and rubbish management has one of the pressing issues both in developing and developed countries. With the inevitable rise in population and industrialization, this problem will be further aggravated. The government can decrease waste production by educating public and by promoting recycling.
to begin with, global population has reached a staggering seven billion recently and solid waste is by product of this phenomenon. It is consider that it would be ballon to nine billion in 2029 if the same rate of populace increased and it require more industrialization to feed them or to complete their basic essentials. In addition to it, hazardous rubbish like empty cans, papers and waste tires on the roads also create a serious problem for the human beings and environment. As a nation, Americans generate more waste than any other nation in the world with 4.5 pounds (2.0 kg) of municipal solid waste (MSW) per person per day, fifty five percent of which is contributed as residential garbage.
In addition to it, there are some useful remedies to curb to, society, businesses and government should working together to increase public awareness about need to recycle, implementing measures and policies aimed at finding new uses to a large portion of waste generated each year. For instance, Sweden has 34 waste to energy power plants, which burn non recyclable waste to generate enough electricity to power 2,50,000 households and contribute to dramatically reduce waste and emission.
In conclusion, government should organize campaign to provide awareness about waste and also take strict steps to control population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
... public and by promoting recycling. to begin with, global population has reach...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...is by product of this phenomenon. It is consider that it would be ballon to nine billion...
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Message: Did you mean 'requires'?
Suggestion: requires
... same rate of populace increased and it require more industrialization to feed them or ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ake strict steps to control population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33707865169 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97883513112 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65543071161 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0690475676 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.5 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0829229806172 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348647490077 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.015549360206 0.0667982634062 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0494371064286 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260719259625 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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