There are different views on the benefits of participating in sports which are played in teams, such as football or attending individual sports, like badminton. i think both types of sport each has its own advantages and disadvantages, which i will discuss these views and give my opinion on the conclusion
On the team sports side, there are two main reasons why people should take part in team sports. Firstly, people who play team sport require participants to cooperate with other teammates, which can help them to improve their teamwork and communication skills. For instance, in a basketball game, players in a team have to work together and try as hard as they can to put the ball into the opponent's basket. Similarly, the process in which employees are required to solve the problems, handle tasks in groups in order to achieve the company's target. Secondly, it is claimed that playing team sports may have a great chance to meet new people and make contact with them. Consequently, they can build up their network, expand relationship, which may help them in their business
On the individual sports side, I believe that individual sports are not as good as team sports, although the former has its advantages. The first reason is that it allows people to enhance their ability in independent ways. For example, When you want to win a badminton match, you have to try your hardest as there is no one else to depend on. Therefore, they would learn how to overcome obstacles in their life.
In conclusion, although some people say that we should take part in solo sports. I completely believe that team sports will bring more benefits for their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8485915493 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62741892214 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2664173573 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363844483567 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117370252059 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10600849882 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216039141186 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777114273713 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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