Some people think that the teengers years are the happiest times of Most people's lives. Others think that adults life brings more happiness ,in spite of greater.
Some people think that the teengers years are the happiest times of Most people's lives. Others think that adults life brings more happiness ,in spite of greater.
It is an undeniable fact that happiness is hard to define because it depends upon person to person, therefore it is claimed by a number of individuals that adalcents years are the pleasure time majority of people's lives . However, others believed that a lot of happiness can be adopted in adult life regardless of more responsibilities. Both the nations will be examined along with the Stance in the subsequent paragraphs.
Commencing with the reasons that justified why teengers can obtain tremendous amount of happiness in their early stage. Initially, they do not have burden regrading financial as they are dependent on their parents for their rudimentary requirements such as school fees , clothes and many more. For instance, they are young, due to this their parents accomplish their all needs like, give expenses gifts , purchase toys and so on ,but they do not know the cost of them . Hence, childhood is golden period of life.
Notwithstanding, there are various causes how adult life can bring happiness . Primarily, persons can become independent by earning handsome salary, in the way they can do everything which they want to do and they do not need to take permission of their parents as they are much mature , so less restrictions can be seen in the life of adults . To clarify, it can be seen that majority of adults explore new places instead of children because no-one ask them where they are going , therefore they may travel a lot at various places . Owing to this, adults can get huge amount of happiness , while doing things according to their disers.
To conclude, happiness is internal feeling which is achieved at that time when things accured according to person choice . It doesn't related to age
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun restrictions is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0127388535 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69311811978 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573248407643 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0751360608 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.933333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301597609509 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126559890257 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17774574766 0.0667982634062 266% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251330426653 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.32031111583 0.056905535591 563% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.