Over the last years life has become quite fast-paced. Despite the technological development which is supposed to free people from tedious tasks, actually a large part of the population seems to have no time to cultivate hobbies. This essay will examine this treacherous trend and underline the crucial role hobbies play in shaping a fruitful life.
The alarm clock goes off, you get breakfast quickly, get on the first clothes you come across and rush to reach your workplace. Eight hours of your day are basically spent on doing a job most people just hate and would rather give up, you go back home, take a shower, eat something, turn the TV on and fall asleep. You go to bed to repeat the same day over and over. Is such a life worth living? What could make life more compelling, more fascinating? Well, you do not have to look so far to find the answer. Just look into yourself and try to find out what really stirs you.
Somewhere in ourselves sleep ancient passions just waiting to be woken up. It is those hidden desires, those dusty dreams that can make our life a bit brighter and more pleasant than usual. The time we spend for develop ourselves is indeed the most precious time we can enjoy. Hobbies play therefore a crucial role in shaping a life full of joy since people can express themselves by painting, drawing, craving, singing, playing music. Following their own passions is an incredibly effective way to unwind and to relax, and that for many reasons. First, people who have hobbies never get tired of life, they steadily try new things and are eager to improve themselves. Second, it can open new horizons and let people getting more closer to each other.
In conclusion, I would recommend everyone to enjoy some sort of hobby. It provides a beneficial impact on the daily life, helps to overcome tough moments and cope with the boredom ensuing an ordinary life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
Over the last years life has become quite fast-paced. Despi...
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Line 5, column 726, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'closer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: closer
...pen new horizons and let people getting more closer to each other. In conclusion, I woul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, look, really, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70481927711 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3818807852 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647590361446 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5992197953 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2105263158 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100953546022 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0258655329345 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0242465465434 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0536576887675 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233969332556 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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