7. People in the limelight have a responsibility to set an example for others by their good behaviour. Do you agree.
Celebrities are always known to carry themselves with dignity in public. Some may agree that they constantly have to be in good reputation in order to be a role model for everyone. However, I believe that it is not necessary for celebrities to always be an inspiration with their best behavior.
Proponents may argue that since celebrities are known to be a brand themselves, they have to maintain a reputable personality with proper manners and principles. Nowadays, the target audience for celebrities have ranged from young teenagers to working adults. Hence, they have to regularly prove to others with philanthropic acts as well as uphold moral conduct without any alcohol or drug abuse. This has inspired their target audience to follow their idol’s footsteps.
However, it is inevitable for celebrities to always inspire everyone with their good conduct. This is because they are bound to make mistakes since they are human beings in nature. Moreover, even with flaws, they accept them wholeheartedly and grow with maturity in efforts to motivate their fandoms to do the same. As a result, their admirers also learn from them. For example, when Robert Downey Junior, a renowned actor, was arrested for his drug abuse, he acknowledged his past by admitting himself in rehabilitation and continued his acting with his well-known character, the Iron Man, which inspired many young teens to be courageous. Hence, being in the limelight not only put pressure on celebrities to be fully aware of their actions, they influence their audience by acknowledging their mistakes and learning from them.
In brief, it is admirable of celebrities to hold themselves with great dignity while accepting their flaws along their journey.
- 8 With the development of the media online there is no future for the radio Do you agree 56
- 6 In the last few decades there have been more and more cases of famous people being hounded by the press Some people think that famous people in the media have no right privacy To what extent do you agree 89
- 9 Some people believe that what children watch on television influences their behaviour Others say that amount of time spent watching television influences their behaviour discuss both views and give opinion 78
- More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged To what extent do you agree 61
- 7 People in the limelight have a responsibility to set an example for others by their good behaviour Do you agree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'agrees'.
Suggestion: agrees
...selves with dignity in public. Some may agree that they constantly have to be in good...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in brief, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24460431655 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82836307781 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0654527052 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180512400541 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712672930095 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438631894578 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116437345609 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300662503505 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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