some people think it is important for children to take a lesson outside classroom. For example by visiting place such as local companies or public building to what extent do you agree or disagree.
In this present era, learning methods are little changed. Few people believe that it is valuable for students to went outsides of the school campus, where they can learn practical skills. This essay will enshrine why people think this, and also explain my agreement in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with, plenty of benefits, which attracted citizens to think in this way. First and foremost, if students visit companies which is related to the field, they get a reasonable experience of companies, which will help them in the future. Furthermore, visiting local building helps to change the atmosphere of teaching which reduce the stress level in the student’s mind, and they become more creative. For example, schools in Japan frequently organized trips to visiting companies or the building, which creates an impact on students academic result.
On the same hand, if schools authorities make a plan for academic your, then that will help to develop a relationship between teachers and students, which make them more friendly, that relationship slove lots of problems which run in the students’ mind and they will create a positive effect on their behaviour as well as result. For instance, more than 70 percentage of toppers have a good relationship with the teachers, it was described in one survey which was conducted by the University of Gujarat in 2018.
To conclude, although classroom study is useful, outside study is more beneficial than traditional study. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the statement because travelling is the best instructor which provides experience, to build a strong relationship with teachers, and also change the atmosphere of study.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...’s mind, and they become more creative. for example, schools in Japan frequently or...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27777777778 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78640881316 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603703703704 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5201454131 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.545454545 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132377854888 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529107294602 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306912499406 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786464304686 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257092105381 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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