Some countries allow old people to work to any age that they want. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In a few certain nations, the elderly are permitted to work until the extent of age they desire. While there exist some drawbacks to this phenomenon, the benefits are more eclipse.
Given the fact that old individuals are comprising of a noticeable number of contemporary population and having an upward tendency in recent decades, the working limit age of senior citizens has been relatively increased, even unlimited in some countries. When an old person does a job, there are more chances for him to make his own’s ends meet, which means the aged individuals can be able to be less dependent on their children, even under certain circumstances, old ones have the ability to support their children financially. In addition to the decrease of burdens on the young in terms of money, old people having plenty of experience in working are easier to accomplish the job compared to young workers acquired specialized training.
However, economics, in general, has experienced several breakthroughs due to the technological revolution, it is expected that the work now requires new labor forces that have the creativity, accuracy, and a quick adaption to new changes. This leads to a relative result that the act of lengthening the retired age indirectly flourishes the unemployment especially young ones who have more innovative and high-tech ideas to replace aged workers who are no longer suitable.
To recapitulate, the limitless working age of old individuals is somehow not beneficial to the development of the community. Hence, a country should consider balancing the number of working people reasonably and adjust an appropriate retirement age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: COMPRISING_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprising' or 'consisting of'?
Suggestion: comprising; consisting of
...Given the fact that old individuals are comprising of a noticeable number of contemporary pop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, so, then, while, as to, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31178707224 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02421709775 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608365019011 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4042998126 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.222222222 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2222222222 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219439650593 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946979664831 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475339443607 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138493515295 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578818624198 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.