the internet has many disadvantages as it does advantages To what extent do you agree with this statement

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the internet has many disadvantages as it does advantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays, the internet is extremely popular around the globe, most people use the internet daily in their lives at work as well as for their students' studies. 'The internet has as many disadvantages as it does advantages', I agree with this idea.
In work, people use internet printing as a work tool. It helps people can keep in touch with each other at a distance, they can exchange information and documents easily and accurately. Moreover, people can advertise their company on the internet, and contact their partners and customers easily. In learning, students can search for information about the subject, as well as learn new things on the internet such as language and culture., ... In life, most people use the internet for entertainment like watch movies, read books and newspapers, playing games,... on the internet.
On the other hand, the internet is also very dangerous, you may be scammed on the internet or be tricked by incorrect information. You can also to be addicted to the internet and it will take a lot of your time
In short, there are advantages and disadvantages to the internet. We should use the internet properly and not overdo it to avoid affecting real life.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 559, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...read books and newspapers, playing games,... on the internet. On the other hand, ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, well, as for, in short, such as, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93034825871 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76461547341 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577114427861 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7329170276 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0909090909 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237774876956 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118726130969 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131753362439 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160666458615 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699578928546 0.056905535591 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 559, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...read books and newspapers, playing games,... on the internet. On the other hand, ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, well, as for, in short, such as, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93034825871 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76461547341 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577114427861 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7329170276 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0909090909 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237774876956 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118726130969 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131753362439 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160666458615 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699578928546 0.056905535591 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.