Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socializing online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person?
The advances in communicative technology enable teenagers to keep in touch and update on their favorite affairs through the cyber world and less in face to face contexts. In this essay I will provide the reasons for this social phenomenon and the remedy for it.
To begin with, there are compelling reasons behind why youngsters prefer virtual socialization. First, it goes without saying that modern communicative technology allows greater convenience. Thanks to social working sites, the Internet, and smart devices, young people can communicate and socialize in the comfort of their own home without having to change and go out to meet their acquaintances in a physical place. In addition, the virtual world offers them opportunities to meet new people on an ever wider contexts. Second, time is undoubtedly a driving force behind this trend among teenagers. Obviously, it is unnecessary for them to wait until a certain time to have conversation with their peers but they can have a conversation virtually 24/7.
This, however, can be alleviated by educating teenagers and provide them alternative activities to do. On the one hand, parents and schools are responsible for bringing to their teenage children's attention the dire menace of lacking in person contact such as weak personal health and interpersonal skills. Should they are convinced of such detrimental effects of online socializing, they may want to stop. On the other hand, alternative activities ought to be provided to them to help them spend less time on the cyber environment. For example, public exercise and sport facilities developed by the government like a basketball court can provide teenagers a place for having fun and working on improving their general health, and increase the chance of them interact with their peers in person.
In summary, while more and more teenagers are keen on socializing on the Internet, effective education from the parents and schools' part in combination with the government's provision of athletic amenities may contribute to battling this problematic phenomenon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, may, second, so, while, for example, in addition, in summary, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3506097561 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95322038351 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2618868398 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.357142857 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181362231803 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593864244457 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388501385184 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101186336987 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331475947238 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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