The maps
The given two maps provide information about developments in Frenton city for 22 years.
Overall, it is seen that, besides a school and a library, and the high street, all other places were replaced throughout the time.
On the left side of the high street, a bank located on the west, which had been transformed into a restaurant. The building of a hospital was expanded in terms of size. Also, trees from the south side and playing fields from the north side were replaced by a technopark and blocks of flats respectively in 2012.
Moreover, on the right side of the street, a theatre, shops, and houses all converted into a cinema, a supermarket, and blocks of flats respectively, whereas a cafe and park, which was in the center of the city, replaced by a new hotel and golf course. Also, new flats were added on the north side. Meanwhile, a school and a library remained unchanged throughout the time.
- In today s world of advanced science and technology we still greatly value our artists such as musicians painters and writers What can art tell us about life that science and technology cannot 61
- Today the life expectancy of people is much higher than before Some people think that older people should continue to be involved in the workforces To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Nowadays international tourism is the biggest industry in the world Unfortunately international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from di erent cultures To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 73
- In today s world of advanced science and technology we still greatly value our artists such as musicians painters and writers What can art tell us about life that science and technology cannot 78
- Nowadays sports is a big business with high earnings for professional sports people and companies involved both financially and other ways Is this a positive or negative development for sports 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, moreover, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7375 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66505159425 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55625 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7332973362 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.75 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0540159946354 0.215688989381 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262194245348 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693700768382 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0524388490696 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908267508789 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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