The population of this planet has shown an exponential growth in the previous century when compared to the ancient times, this has directly effected the flora and fauna due to the deforestation caused during civilization and urban development. Here I would like to elaborate this and also discuss dome measures to prevent it.
To embark on, there are myriad reasons for stripping woods as timber is used in multifarious ways and has various types of bi-products pretty famous in market these days. Moreover, folks have started to convert green lands to either residential or commercial complexes, As time passed these small complexes integrated into massive concrete forests which once were evergreen lands and habitat for many species of living beings.further more, there are certain species of animals with an ornamental value of body parts or a particular use and therefore become endangered due to consistent pouching and hunting leading to the extinction of the species, for instance, there are many animals expected to be extinct in the upcoming decade like the one horned rhinoceros for horn, the Indian elephant for tusks and Bengal tiger for coat and paws. If this continues it is very precarious for the ecosystem as it disturbs the equilibrium of the food web.
It is peak time that we repair or take care of our planet in order to expect the same care from the planet like the past for the future, I will list out few measures to have a sustainable development. Firstly, Greenland conversion should be restricted globally in order to prevent over exploitation of humans for residential or commercial purposes. Secondly, Natural forests should be restricted to be a source of soft commodities for commercial purposes and the goods should be cultivated on private lands. Further more, The trade of products related to endangered species should be strictly banned both in legal and illegal market in order to prevent illegal hunting of animals.
To conclude, Earth has everything for a humans needs but has nothing for a humans greed and this greed will massively effect the upcoming generations as the present generation exploited the non-conventional resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...or a humans needs but has nothing for a humans greed and this greed will massively eff...
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ans greed and this greed will massively effect the upcoming generations as the present...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16430594901 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85253226965 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580736543909 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.484253181 49.4020404114 319% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.3 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.3 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0934741612623 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308496827286 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284172311494 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0470210583044 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313715518023 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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