Technology has no doubt evolved exponentially in the recent decades, the fact modern technology makes life complex was always a contentious topic by the masses. In my opinion it has made our life easier than ever before, this essay is written in the belief that technology has made our life better.
Firstly, in the 21st century advancement in tech world have reached new bounds, making every day task easier and more efficient. For instance, communication is relatively more convenient than ever before, this could be contributed to the advancement in the mobile phone technology. In addition to making a phone call with relatively less effort, we can browse through the internet for information through a pocket-able device carried by almost every individual in this contemporary society. Furthermore, everyday task like shopping for grocery, navigation, taking a picture, etc, could be done within the palm of our hand. Making the modern smart phone a boon the this age.
Secondly, the most crucial part of technological advancement would be globalization, this has forged a new path towards global awareness. For example, people are more informed with what is going on around the globe than ever before, thanks to the internet and television which is a norm in the modern society, issues like global-warming could be educated to a wider range of audience, moreover, people can spread awareness with the help of internet which is now accessible to almost all of the masses. Studies done in 2015 by Haverd university clearly indicates, how technology has influenced people about the effects of global warming. When people are asked about the topic they more or less know the consequences of this phenomena, moreover, they are more likely to change their way of living to contribute to bring about a change in the environment.
To summaries, technology has no doubt more influence over our life than ever before, however, utilizing it in a educational and convenient way is without a doubt more advantageous than ever before.
- The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places What are the serious problems and what measures can be taken to solve this problem 56
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 78
- As we are facing many problems which affect the whole planet good relationships between different countries are becoming more important than ever before To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- The continued rise in the world s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time What are the causes of this continued rise Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity 67
- Animals are in danger of extinction Some people say that we should protect only those animals which are useful to humans Do you agree or disagree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 661, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
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Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ernet which is now accessible to almost all of the masses. Studies done in 2015 by Haverd ...
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Line 5, column 719, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...y more or less know the consequences of this phenomena, moreover, they are more like...
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Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n ever before, however, utilizing it in a educational and convenient way is witho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, in my opinion, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1696969697 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89415991544 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.4365622842 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.166666667 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176217551508 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699752112062 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634751138507 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121092594497 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761153517623 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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