Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that it is a good thing, while others think that it has disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
sponsoring sports events are considered the best bay of product marketing and branding nowadays. it influences many new companies to grow their business. well, some people say this is good, but others are not agreed with this statement. I would believe this as a good idea.
when company sponsor the events, sports equipment and uniforms; the organizers do not have to worry about the funding. Also, sometimes growing companies get a lot customers because of the famous sports has a myriad of viewers. for example, jio Network by Reliance Industries provides T-shirts to each teams of ipl (Indian Premier League) and the ipl has a massive fan in India. that's how jio achieved a lot of customers. Furthermore the company whose product are environment friendly and sustainable sends a good message to viewers and society and it helps to change the world to a better place. giving an example to that, the Solarcoster Co. selling solar panels and everyone aware that solar power is sustainable, environmentally friendly and nonpolluted. when this company sponsored a football event, it draws millions of customers to make roof top of their house using solar panels and it saved a lot electricity.
On the downside, sometimes some companies whose product gives wrong influences on people. For instance, if a tobacco company advertises its product through the sewing their logo in uniform, then it sends a wrong message to society especially a lot of young people. In addition, the sport person put a great impression to his fans apparently. So events organizers must have to check that the events has a lot impacts on people especially young generations.
To conclude this sponsor sports events get them both the benefits. The business gets brand recognition, customers and generates its revenue and teams & organizers have not to worry about the funding. However sometimes wrong product does impact bad a lot on people and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12025316456 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77415336948 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563291139241 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.189826477 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8888888889 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163904963333 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538034537637 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378686123659 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106667265457 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035498119711 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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