In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age.
Is this a positive or negative development?
In today’s economic turmoil it has become difficult to find a well-paid job. Therefore, in some countries, there are laws for protecting the rights of people, whose job applicants are rejected by the companies for the reason of their age. I believe this is happening clearly for the better.
The most beneficial contribution of activating bans is solving some macro-economic issues such as unemployment. because nowadays companies refuse not only pensioners, also those who have not enough experience, which negatively influences the development of future specialists. Hence, situations like this increase the rate of unemployment, and then it can lead to privative consequences such as a drop in living standards or rising in crime in the state. On another hand, we can say that by reducing the problem of unemployment, the country will be able to replenish its budget with the help of officially employed people. They will pay taxes from their incomes and the administration has an increased ability to provide social protection, which will lead to the general prosperity of the people.
Adversaries of this positive position may say that if the companies hire employees not appropriating by age, it can fetch in a decrease in productivity. Someone who does not have experience may make a job inappropriate or elderly workers cannot quickly adapt to innovations. However, these beliefs are not very convincing for me, in that the qualification of employees differs from each other despite heir age.
In conclusion, I propose that companies giving a chance to every individual will be a rod to countries development because it is fair and it helps to improve the economy of the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20879120879 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13409727237 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626373626374 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0759695246 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357656605058 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107385115748 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114563279451 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197009614897 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131754689935 0.056905535591 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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