The contemporary society is pushed by the internet, more and more companies have been taking advantage of this development by making work from home a norm. In the below essay, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages will be agreed upon by analysis.
On the one hand, there are myriad reasons illustrating why working from home is beneficial. Firstly, the location restrictions companies had to abide by is no more. an employ can be hired from any part of the globe regardless of his location. Secondly, working from home is far more convent, the timing can be more flexible to suit the personal need of the employ, Furthermore, this has shown to improve productivity as the employs are well rested. Thirdly, the financial burden on the company for rental could be lifted, this money can then be used else where that would severe a better purpose.
On the contrary, there are no doubt many draw backs of working online. For starters, important skills like unity, team-spirit, loyalty are been forgotten or hard to develop due to this online world. Moreover, companies tend to exploit this opportunity by making longer shifts. In addition to, working for longer hours, they are been under paid for their work. Additionally, companies are not able to make their new employs feel welcomed, as face to face orientation programs have been known to gain a sense of belonging.
To conclude, although, working online has its share of compromises, however, the disadvantages can be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, in addition, no doubt, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07723577236 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80156809532 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626016260163 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8728726171 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0769230769 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121923634549 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457458222207 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590308348686 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951400231255 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802385463682 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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