Young people are now spending more and more time and money following fashion trends. What is your opinion? Is this a positive or negative development
there is a growing concern about the phenomenon that more and more youngsters are jumping on the fashion trend bandwagon without taking their time and money expenditures into consideration. From my perspective, this tendency bears both merits and demerits due to the following reasons.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that following the trend can bring certain advantages to the youth on the whole. first and foremost, fashion is widely considered as a mean of self-expression since people’s style is the best reflection of their characteristics. this appear to be crucial to the young, especially gen Z, who always crave for expressing their ideas and personalities in order to bring positive influence on every aspect of their lives. Moreover, many individuals find themselves more confident by dressing in vogue. this confidence would make a great contribution to not only their career but also their everyday relationships owing to the fact that they are able to make a strong impression on employers, colleagues and friends. another plus point of staying up-to-date with the latest trend is that it would have a significant impact on the growth of the fashion industry in the long run. The more people purchase, the stronger the development of the country’s economy is.
Although leading the trend has many benefits, there still exist some noteworthy drawbacks. The first minus point that comes to our mind is that a variety of youngsters indulge in the fashion trend without considering about its application to their styles. As a consequence, they end up squandering time and money on unnecessary items that they never wear twice. Secondly, the price of some items are sometimes out of their affordability, this can drive some to the edge of bankruptcy or even committing a crime so as to have the ability to own these high-end products. another reason which is worth noting is that idling too much time shopping would have a detrimental effect on the young’s work and study. As little time is spent on learning, students may get low marks, fail to pass their exams or even fall behind other peers. Furthermore, youngsters’ eagerness to be in contact with the latest trend may bring them down if they are unable to stay on track, as a result, they may have to suffer from poor mental condition in the long term.
All in all it is my belief that spending time and money to live in vogue have both positive and negative impacts on the young.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, as to, as a result, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96376811594 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84331940082 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562801932367 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9955015053 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.882352941 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3529411765 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271495587783 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797538823935 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644086456683 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180392723945 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552741565245 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.