The diagram below shows how two types of olive oil are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram sheds lights on how extra virgin olive oil and olive oil are made. While the production of olive oil required 6 steps, the procedure for extra virgin olive oil is less sophisticated, with just 5 steps in total. Both of them initiating with harvesting olive oil and culminating in packaging stages.
The production of both types of oil start with the harvest of olive from olive tree. In the subsequent stage, these fruits are ground by a mill machine before being pressed down in the third step so that oil can be separated from the mixture. From then, the oil will either go through only one filtering step so as to produce extra virgin olive oil consuming in the market or being refined in order to make refined olive oil. Following that, the latter is blended with virgin olive oil and being packaged as a milder type of oil, olive oil.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 309, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ther go through only one filtering step so as to produce extra virgin olive oil consumin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, third, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 705.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57792207792 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.312937427 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.862125909 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211883506021 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129524652791 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600991231734 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184156140005 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0054054400888 0.0819641961636 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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