Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Reading paper materials is better than watching electronic devices to gain information.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that with the advancement in society, people are thriving hard to keep their knowledge up to date and,make themself more informed. In this regard, source of information and knowledge is of paramount importance. There are different schools of thought among people on whether to get information from books or through electronic devices. If I were asked, I would agree with the idea of getting information by reading paper materials such as books. In what follows, I will delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
The first compelling reason corroborating my viewpoint is associated with the notion that people gain information from books and keep them long in their memories. On the other hand, individuals who learn by watching electronic devices forget the information soon.Since reading is an active process, it requires energy, hence all the information that we learn, we can easily memorize them and they keep in our memory for longer period of time. Mt personal experience is a profound example. Five years ago, when I was in high shool. My Chemistry teacher gave us a test to memorize,the whole chapter of organic chemistry. I thought it was a long topis, therefore i watched a movie about organic chemistry to clarify my all concepts. Unfortunately, at the day of test, I failed my exam becasue I could not recalled all the information from the movie. Later on, I spend10 hours to read organic chemistry chapter from the text books. Though, It took longer for me to memorize, I scored excellent in my final exam. I even have those concepts in my mind now. This is due to the reason that reading from books is effective.
The second rationale behind my opinion in rooted in the fact that learning through books are more convenient and easier. Infact, people can keep record of their study by reading from paper material. This is due to the fact that students can easily highlight the important points, underline the information, takes notes and stick notes on the paper based materials. Moreover, books are more organized and detailed so people can easily check the chapter from index and direcly go to the required chapter to study. By the way of illustration, last semester, when I was taking the biology classes, I had difficuly in understanding the reproduction chapter. Therefore, I asked my teacher to help me. When he was teaching me, I was able to hightlight all the informations. Those were the key points that i reviewed after going back home. Not only, this when I was preparing at home from the boo, I remembered other thing which my professor had mentioned, I took notes on small sticky notepad and stick them to the required pages. It made my study convenient because next time when i started studying them I just reviewed those high lighted points and my sticky notes. If i had watched a movie, It would not have been such convenient.
By perusing above paragraphs, one can infer that reading paper materials have innumerable advantages. For the sake of brevity, few points are worth reiterating. First, it helps retaining information better. Second, It is convenient source of knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, such as, by and large, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2656.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 536.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9552238806 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79759189003 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526119402985 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 820.8 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 25.0 9.59856630824 260% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.4003979142 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6774193548 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2903225806 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.32258064516 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.88709677419 327% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133989683368 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350007442453 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482784373709 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988302803686 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451725933512 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.